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your bones are small,
but strong

like your heart,
they've never been broken

oh child,
stay away from the world

oh child,
i hope you never
realize

that dreams only
last for the night
I want everyone to stop growing up right now please and thank you
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Daily Deviation

Given 2014-03-26
Oh Child by Phan5everx2 cuts to the chase that we all try to grow up too fast and don't take the time appreciate our youth until it's too late. ( Suggested by TruthisTruth and Featured by GrimFace242 )
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Inchaotus Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe it's not your best, but it is excellent. Getting a Daily Deviation with poetry is practically an impossibility, so it sure is an honor to get one :p
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Phan5everx2 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i agree and thank you so much :D i felt very honored :)
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MaryItIs Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That hit hard, inside here somewhere
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beleave Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
too right.
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LindArtz Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
This lil'  shorty really packs a punch! Congratulations on a very well deserved DD!
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LaughButts Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;_; This is too depressing for words. 
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dappspalecy Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:''
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XxKraitxX Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Harsh and lovely
Great job
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kirakishousakurada Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
Your poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing it Ralts 
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Saiyanpelt-and-Co Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I badly want ro be a second-grader again, although I'm only twelve. If I could, O wouldgo back and beg me not to do things I want to erase from memory. This poem is so true.
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