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Dance with death

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smooth and intricate,
flowing yet erratic,
changing leads so swiftly,
there is despair and sorrow here,
yet relief when the music fades
(a guilty sigh as we slip from the dance floor)
One wrong step is all it takes (a slip of the tongue)
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ALBDreamweaver's avatar
Favorite. Usually I get annoyed and small case poems, yet here it seemed to just make the work that much more...subdued, I suppose?

I greatly enjoyed it. For that, you get a follow.